We don't need to hide and seek
Let's hide and seek, my dear, in the unseen Universe ,
Where the horizons are boundless and love timeless .
I don't need to find you because I've caught you ...
Since the birth of Eternity on the clouds of Time .
My eyes are Sun's rays shining over all black shades,
They are green like breathing leaves in brightness
Embracing you with their vision over the river waves,
Let's make a cosmic journey in the Light of Darkness !
To fly in happiness and smile to the guiding Moon,
Clearing our way to the white and heavenly paths..
There are no terrifying things or angry beings soon,
Don't worry, my muse, the Angels take care of us !
I am happy to hold your kind soul, so gentle and true
As you felt only your mother's sweet silence in Truth
Music of all flowers is singing their perfume for you
Heavenly sounds covering all your passion through .
It's my Love who kisses the rain of your deep thirst
And feels the response of your unique tender touch
Your old wishes to love and to be loved are first,
My feelings for you are deep and tender, so much ..
Three words that define life needing them like breath,
Not necessary ages to know the true meaning of love
It lives in the profound feelings we timeless meet ,
There are no definitions or explanations in God .
It's the simplest feeling we can ever have in life
I LOVE YOU, three pure words from heart and mind.
Hide and seek is only for the souls touching High
Still looking for their endless sacred love in bright !
We don't need to play this game ,
We have found each other's flame !
Haminia Haar
21 June 2012
2 comentarii:
Jennifer Lynn Cochran-Willnow :
SO beautifully written Haminia. It described my fantasy of a soul mate lover. One you love so much that you wish you could mesh your bodies together and stay that way for eternity. A passionate love. Thank you for the beautiful mind trip into paradise.
Adi Ghassemi :
ohhh,,,this poem touched my soul,,,,Heart of Gratitude my dear Beloved Haminia Haar, with tearful eyes, sending you infinite of Love, light, and Blessings.(((♥♥♥)))
Mohindar Singh :
A poem with a contrast. Well written.
Ketan Patel :
Lovely Poem Dear Haminia ....
Sultan Khilji :
One of your Best, Haminia. Absolutely gorgeous!
Charanjeet Singh Lamba Sister:
Haminia Haar,
You Just Said It So Beautifully
All Known To Self Is Being Of Grace Unto Self.. Our Essence`
Essence At Mind & Heart Serves Answers To Divine Incognito`
Preeth Nambiar :
Beautifully composed, Haminia! Lots of love :)
Puneet Bhatt :
♥ GOD LOVES YOU TOO ♥ Haminia Haar Your "love" has touched evry soul ♥
Dom Colucci Author :
My eyes Now see you...it was the Awareness within us both that made us coincide in symmetry...we are of both as in one as we always were..we are the Truth that Now can never be separated...we are of Love, we are of Now...we are the Soul*..One...thank you my Dearest Haminia for this enlightened tag....enjoy as well...♥~
Lisa Briggs :
What a beautiful heart you have --- very lovely poem Dear Haminia♥
Dom Colucci Author :
Enjoy my Dearest Haminia...the Soul* is always happiest when it feels you are enjoying....you are welcome...♥~
Dom Colucci :
Author gratitude as always as this is what supports us from within...Soul* that made us from conception into Consciousness and its only wish is for us to see it integrally so that we may be Awakened with its gift for us....enjoy my Dearest Haminia...♥~
Ketan Patel :
Thank you DEAR Haminia ... Have a Great week ahead ♥
Christina Polanska :
An enchanting beauty of this poem!! Phrase in the words is what we feel through them and be able to share with the other. Highly esteemed! Thank you, Dear Haminia! :) ♥
Ketan Patel :
The Love doesn't
shine by shaking
hands in the best times
But
It blossoms by holding
the hands firmly in
critical times..
Muzi Bhat :
This is beautiful poem.... Dear friend.
Estela Solorio :
Thank you my friend. Haminia Haar beatifull poem.God bless you always to you and your family happy sunday
Surya Prakash Dwivedi:
You can't hide as you live in me and I live in you. I don't need to seek you as my eyes see you everywhere and everytime.
So "We don't need to play this
game ,
We have found each other's
flame !"
Amazing one by Haminia..kudos 2 u!!!
Blue Saffire:
A very Beautiful ~ Heartfelt note Haminia Haar ....loved each line !!!tHANK yOU so much for including me in this awesome tag !
Haminia Haar Thank you all : Cristina, Muzi, Estela, Surya, Ketan, Asis ! God bless Us in friendship !
D Dori Georges:
Very beautiful my dear... Thank you...
Christina Polanska:
Haminia, your poem is indeed a musical phrase.
Surya Prakash Dwivedi :
I may be good if you think so but you are much better in my view.
Francesca Castaño :
"...like breathing leaves in brightness..." *♥+
Sultan Khilji :
Thank you dear friend! :)
Guthema Roba :
This is beautiful Haminia. Thank you much for sharing.♥♥
Jackson Scully :
Sharing, hope thats ok
Megan Vargas Micaller:
Wow...wonderful sharing..thank you beloved..i love it!..Namaste!
Susan Merzouk :
This is gorgeous Haminia, oh it really strikes a chord with me and I was welling up with emotion reading this. There are so many beautiful lines in this but 'music of all flowers is singing their perfume for you ' resonates.
And your spirituality shines through here ... ♥
Lorraine Cohen :
Wonderful ♥
Ajit Sripad Rao Nalkur:
Great ending! And there is great beauty in this poem.
Theresa Stuart:
Absolutely beautiful well done T♥
Star Burrows :
Haminia, Beautiful to BE enveloped this poem ~ You capture it beautifully three words yes ~Be this a Twin Flame poem? or One that has met another 's flaming heart soul~that burns so brightly it leads to you and them and mayhaps we ALL Come together in ~LOVE..??
Joseph Arrigo:
Haminia,I always felt deep within you had a beautiful voice:) well done !
Ajit Sripad Rao Nalkur :
That's a very profound and mystical comment you just made, Haminia Haar, about "many more twin flames in the universe"...hmmm..
Joseph Arrigo:
Well actually there are in well intoned understanding.each on a differing plane.each a substance that connects through others to align the whole..
Jennifer Lynn Cochran-Willnow:
You are really good at romantic poetry Haminia Haar, I think you found your niche. I had to read it twice I loved it so much. I want more about the flame!
Bada Yusuf Amoo;
Haminia, I heard the voice of nightingale singing the metre of your poetry as i read over it, i'm a voiceless poet that have many to say when it comes to love but what is the sweetnes of love when our souls are running toward the grave. This is indeed a beautiful poem...
Stephen Dick:
The poem intros an invitation to a game and ends with a rejection of the same game. Interesting terminals of contrast. I'm sure there's a term for that in poetic parlance. Lines that won't let go of me are: "Music of all flowers is singing their perfume for you " Thats an uncommon marraiage, music and flowers. But the part that really did me in was "...singing their perfume for you." That is poetry with finesse, Haminia. I just put it on and wow, you should see how beautiful it looks on me. I lurv your capping verse for its rhyme and depth. "We don't need to play this game ,
We have found each other's flame " A word of advice to those who go up in love's flame: If the night meets you aflame, BURN IT DOWN and let its ashes await day light. :)
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Haminia Haar Stephen Dick, you are right about the first and the last lines, but you didn't see the third line of the poem ( the second sentence ) where I said : " I don't need to find you because I've caught you ...
Since the birth of Eternity on the clouds of Time . " I started my poem with a joke between the two flame lovers who had caught each other in their play in the Universe " SINCE THE BIRTH OF ETERNITY ON THE CLOUDS OF TIME..." It is not a contrast, it is the same idea from the title of the poem " WE DON'T NEED TO HIDE AND SEEK " because they had found each other since ages...As about " Music of all flowers is singing their perfume for you " ..., this is a beautiful metaphor of expressing Love when the imaginations has no limits. It is possible only in true Love which is divine and when the flowers sing their perfumes to Love and we are able to smell it, just like feeling God's existence. God is the best perfume for Humanity and we should smell it, not to make artificial perfumes...Dear, I don't like the ash and to use it in my poems because I believe only in Light which is always burning! More beautiful at Night ! If you can understand...Thank you for your beautiful and detailed comment !!
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