I WOULD PAINT A RAINBOW FOR YOU
If I were to describe you, my sweet,
I would paint you a rainbow on my wall
To see your brightness, gentle heat,
And breathe the perfume of flowers,all.
Each color will smile to me with love,
Flowing your feelings, rivers to the sea,
My happy heart will fly to the sky, above
Wishing you eagerly, come and see me.
Your blackish eyes are stars at night,
Moon light never alone lets me feel.
Rainbow, treasure of your gifts wide,
Timeless entered my soul so,so deep ..
Red color is our thirsty tight lips ,
Wishing some blessing drops of rain,
To fill with Blue and cool dream wish,
Watering our burning fire in flame..
Oh, my dear lover, Rainbow of the world ,
Why do you melt my being so much,
Who gives you the power to hold ,
My life and existence in your touch ?
You came to my mind as a skyshow,
I painted you as heavenly Light ,
Made of all colors, for you to know,
My feelings are divine and bright !
I want to marry you, my Rainbow,
To wear the most beautiful dress,
Universe colors to cover our Love,
One soul to be in happiness !
Haminia Haar,
"Inside The Love"
Copyrights@July28,2012
2 comentarii:
Guthema Roba:
This is beautiful Haminia. Thank you♥♥
Jennifer Lynn Cochran-Willnow:
It had my attention captured all the way through it Haminia. So very beautiful and romantic. This is one of your best. It is seared into my mind now.
Rial Ahsan:
Dear Haminia Haar: Love your senses of romanticism and the wonderful expressive ways to make it lively..Loved it with all my heart..May our world still conserve such feelings of love and make the world go round..
Rosana Schone :
Very beautiful Haminia !
Ali Afnan Healer :
Very sweet and beautiful
Ina de Graaf : ♥ ♥
Baldev Sharma 'Dhoundiyal':
You have expressed e'things that was in your heart for your love. There is a depth in this poem and you have intelligently painted all the colors into it. Keep going Haminia Haar.. well done.
Surya Prakash Dwivedi:
Haminia Haar !
This is the most beautiful composition by you. Every line is full of passion and one can feel it vividly while reading it. Definitely your heart is filled with true love and this makes you write so beautiful lines.
My best wishes wd u :)
Francisco Navarro : Nice!!
Sultan Khilji :
I think your poetry says a lot about how you perceive the philosophy of Love. Overall a good rhyming exercise. Very nice! :)
Vimal Chhabra : Superb..
Abdus Sahid:
Many many thanks for tagging this nice poem........
Charanjeet Singh Lamba :
Sister Haminia Haar Ji`
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Poesy.. Poem.. Ever Remained The Matter Of Self In Essence,
Haminia Haar :
Thank you, dear friends for appreciating my thoughts : Jennifer, Rial, Guthema, Rosana, Ali, Ina, Baldev, Surya, Franisco, Sultan, Vimal, Abdus, Charanjeet, M.r. Sandvoss, Eun-Jae, Rodica, Dorland, Kathleen and all the others. You have great love in your heart !
Franco Tam :
IN THIS SUPERLATIVE POEM I SEE THE RAINBOW ..... AND I FEEL ALL THE LOVE OF YOUR BEAUTIFUL SOUL ... ♥ ... THANK YOU MY DEAR Haminia Haar ♥♥♥ .... YOU TOUCHED MY HEART .... MUAAACCKKK HAMINIAAAAA ♥♥♥
Preeth Nambiar :
"If I were to describe you, my sweet,
I'd paint you a rainbow on my wall....." Fantastic, Haminia!
The imageries used in this, I think, is among the most wonderful I have read during the recent days. And when I read this I'm made absolutely speechless.
No words can represent my feelings about this!! Love this!!
Preeth Nambiar :
A ton LIKEes for this!
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Haminia Haar:
Thank you, Preeth ! Your appreciation is very important for me because I like your writings very much, as you know and you are a very good example of a writer in modern times !
Haminia Haar:
Franco, thank you very much for appreciating this poem so much !
Ileana Rindasu :
Thank you so much, Haminia! Like other friends here have said, I feel the same: you touched my heart with the beauty of this poem! Thank you again!
Ahsan Habib:
This poem has satisfied me fully! Wonderful. . .
Haminia Haar:
Thank you, dear friends : Ileana and Ahsan for appreciating my thoughts.
Gurudutt Bannikod:
Thanks for the tag dear..........
Very beautiful poem !
Abdus Sahid :
Haminia you used nice and uncommon words to express the poetic thoughts. thanks for tagging.....
Heidi J. Kan:
Haminia, thank-you for the lovely poem of happiness in the Rainbow ♥ And for the beautiful scene of Kauai ♥ For sharing your heart
Ursa Karp:
Haminia, beautiful, dear friend, thankyou ♥
Adi Ghassemi Such a beautiful poem...Thank you beautiful soul Haminia...much love and eternal Blessings...with love...♥♥♥
Haminia Haar:
Thank you very much, dear friends : Gurudut, Abdus, Heidi, Ursa, Adi and all the others mentioned before, for appreciating this poem so much. Yes, I wrote it from my heart.
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